Adam's special object
I´ve chose the car for Adam, because in this car Adam kissed Amy in the car the first time.
Also the car show that Adam is independent, he can drive where ever he wants.
I'm sorry, Timo, but you can do so much better than this!!
- "I've chosen"
- "because it was in this car that Adam" (for more emphasis)
- "the car shows"
- a connective is necessary (no "running comma"): "because he can drive..."
"wherever"
Moreover, a description of the car would be helpful!
Greetings,
Ms Mettjes