https://englishprojektGK2.blogger.de/ The Blog is a reading log of the book"the war between the classes" Blogger.de tenergy 2011-05-10T00:12:19Z en hourly 1 2000-01-01T00:00:00Z https://englishprojektGK2.blogger.de/stories/1787333/comments/1822275/ Hi, it's good that you keep track of your thoughts during reading, but your spelling is a problem. "I" -> capitalized "strict" "Japanese" "she was late" "They can't" (by the way, who? Amy's dad and Adam? ;-)) "that they would get" Greetings, Ms Mettjes Blogger.de mettjes Copyright © 2011 mettjes 2011-05-10T00:12:19Z https://englishprojektGK2.blogger.de/stories/1818802/comments/1822271/ Once again, I'm sorry for the harsh verdict, but this just won't do. The first sentence (-> "here") only consists of unnecessary sign-posting. The word "special" is too general - I still don't know what you think. The same holds true for the next sentence - "Adam and Amy are good" - do you mean the characters or the actors? What exactly is "good" about them? The next sentence should be more detailed: What is missing, why is that important, what do YOU miss most? "in a way" - NOT helpful. In... Blogger.de mettjes Copyright © 2011 mettjes 2011-05-10T00:06:58Z https://englishprojektGK2.blogger.de/stories/1818800/comments/1822267/ I'm sorry, Timo, but you can do so much better than this!! - "I've chosen" - "because it was in this car that Adam" (for more emphasis) - "the car shows" - a connective is necessary (no "running comma"): "because he can drive..." "wherever" Moreover, a description of the car would be helpful! Greetings, Ms Mettjes Blogger.de mettjes Copyright © 2011 mettjes 2011-05-10T00:00:45Z https://englishprojektGK2.blogger.de/stories/1818802/ I will make a short film review here, I think the film 'The War between the Classes" is a very special film;) When I first saw the film I thought Amy and Adam are good but I dislike Brian at all. Also I think the film is too short to show the whole story of the CG, but in a way the film is good but only for a first impression. Blogger.de tenergy Copyright © 2011 tenergy 2011-05-03T14:28:31Z https://englishprojektGK2.blogger.de/stories/1818800/ I´ve chose the car for Adam, because in this car Adam kissed Amy in the car the first time. Also the car show that Adam is independent, he can drive where ever he wants. Blogger.de tenergy Copyright © 2011 tenergy 2011-05-03T14:25:23Z https://englishprojektGK2.blogger.de/stories/1789331/comments/1796356/ Hi, this text is too short for a comment, and the grammar is faulty. - he / she / it: Carol reacts - adverb: Carol reacts very confidently - tense: simple present! - he / she / it: doesn't Greetings, Ms Mettjes Blogger.de mettjes Copyright © 2011 mettjes 2011-03-21T23:47:06Z https://englishprojektGK2.blogger.de/stories/1792265/comments/1796352/ Hi, I like the general idea behind this entry. Unfortunately, neither spelling nor grammar are acceptable! It's "the" title, "ambiguous", "between" (you misspelled that in two different ways!), "mean", "social", and "tendency". Furthermore, you need to make use of the "he / she /it" rule ("it means"), and "on the one hand" should be followed by "on the other". Please use a dictionary to check your spelling! Greetings, Ms Mettjes Blogger.de mettjes Copyright © 2011 mettjes 2011-03-21T23:43:17Z Search this site: q https://englishprojektGK2.blogger.de/search